Kinda lame, but I got what was advertised. The animating and voice acting wasn't poor either, so while I don't love it, I'm not gonna blam it.
Kinda lame, but I got what was advertised. The animating and voice acting wasn't poor either, so while I don't love it, I'm not gonna blam it.
I hadn't seen any of your previous animations before this, but I really enjoyed it. I'm going to go back and watch the previous ones right now. Great technical skill and good story.
thank you! And yes i do recommend seeing the prior animations to get a better sense of what is going on.
This was a near-perfect combination of narrative, visual style, and music. If I were suggest anything for improvement, it would be perhaps getting a better mic/work on voice-editing, but you already acknowledge this in your post. I enjoyed it very much and will have to share it with others in the future.
thanks! :)
Crude and offensive, but plays off of some of the show's internal gags well. Especially enjoyed Spike continuing even after being caught.
The first part of the song was a little lame, but got better with the bear section. Your animation was pretty good and the style wasn't too shabby, either.
Huzzah, my good man. That was a video worthy of the queen.
This is a pretty solid animation. Liked the style and the music. If you could set up a place where you could upload a better-quality video, I'd definitely would like to see it. Good job.
Yep thanks very much !
I uploaded that on my youtube account and my deviant page anyway.
too bad i can't upload more than 10 mb files so the quality is awful
sorry.
Your story fits the music very well and the setting just made the music even more haunting and depressing (which is good). The only reason I'm shaving off 1 1/2 points is that you have room to grow both in style and skill. Keep up the work, I enjoyed it.
This isn't too shabby. I really liked your subject because I think everyone has had that moment when I game seems to break them emotionally.
Some points: I thought the suicide ending was a little too abrupt and made a poor punchline on what was shaping into a nice joke. Also, the sound sometimes cuts out during the game when the video loops around. Finally, I'd recommend not using flashing color effects. They will make your work look amateurish.
Other than that, good job! Keep refining your skill and technique. You have a good start.
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