It's ok. Too short to really establish the joke and make it hit home. But the sound effects were pretty well time and selected.
It's ok. Too short to really establish the joke and make it hit home. But the sound effects were pretty well time and selected.
Kinda weird, but well done.
Thanks.
The personality of the character was a little over the top and the jokes were a little heavy-handed and drawn out. I got that the kid was absurdly infatuated with the game in the first 20 secs. Couldn't you have found anything else to make fun of after that?
That was the point. It was supposed to be over the top. I could have found something else to make fun of, hell, I could have found plenty of things. But I wanted the movie to be short. I appreciate the input though.
My only real complaint is that the potential of this feels a little wasted. If you could have just set it to the intro for "Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger" the video would have been at least have been worth a star more. But for something simple for your friend, it works pretty well and I loved how you made the two characters with nothing but lines.
Thanks for the advice! If I had more time, I would have even subtracted/added bits of the completed drawing to match with the beat.
This was pretty nice. Too short in my opinion. I loved MM's expression.
Pretty epic intro, though I feel you over did it with the exposition. Try more showing and less telling to give the character a background.
Nice job on the lighting. And like some of your other submissions, your art style is both unique and wonderful to look at. For those of us that are just starting along the path of animation, you willing to share tips on how you did the lighting effect? ;-)
Thanks a lot. Maybe I'll do a tutorial or something of how I made the lighting.
I've watched it twice and I honestly think my brain is blocking the joke in hopes of protecting me :). Nice job, all around, especially with the selection of music at the end.
This is a cute video. Your sister's voice acting is great. And the expression on your character's face when he watches the video is priceless.
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