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Wow, kinda grim, but well-executed. I think you did well on the art style and the animation speed, but the smoothness of the animation was a little off. If you were going for stop-motion jerkiness, though, you probably needed to go further. But overall, I enjoyed this piece.

The major hang-ups that I saw were the voice-acting and pacing of the plot. I could barely understand what the characters were saying. And then at some points the jokes were rushed while others stretched out too long. Work a bit on both and I think everyone will be impressed.

The humor was a little flat in my opinion, but I thought the drawing style was really good and the narrative made sense. Work on the tiny details: 1) character voices could be cleaned up; 2) car's wheels only start rolling AFTER it stops. Good job, though.

Nice observational piece. I'm sure there are plenty of people who can identify with it on this site. But could you have picked a less annoying song? :)

I had forgotten about this series. Glad you are keeping up with it. Only thing I would add is working on the audio. Here and there it is difficult to understand what people are saying, though it gets across for the most part.

Warlord-of-Noodles responds:

Those horrid audio days are over^^ I've got a splendid new mic and it's clarity is sooo much better^^

Nice combo of different features. When's part 2 coming out?

NightmareCinemas responds:

im working on it right now hopefully im done in 2 days :D

This was pretty cool. I wish you had included at least 1 shadow clone bit for Naruto and Gear 3rd for Luffy, but that's just personal preference. Good job.

This being Newgrounds, I kept expecting some awful punchline, but was delighted when one didn't come. Thank you for the lovely story.

Piggybank12 responds:

That was one of the reasons I originally wasn't going to submit to NG. I know there's a lot of people that can appreciate a more sad yet hopeful story like this one here, yet there seems to be even more people that just want a good funny animation sometimes (including me, haha). And of course, it's no mystery about the MLP hate here, which was another reason I didn't want to submit this here.

It's wonderful to see people that like MLP and also hate it judging this animation for what people think it honestly succeeds at, without any need to know specifics about the characters or even a need to like the source material.

Thank you for leaving a review, I do appreciate it like all the others!

Both endings are very humorous. And the animation/artwork was well done. Great job.

The animation is pretty smooth and the style works. My biggest problem is the voices. Did you use a voice simulation program? If so, its lacking the expressiveness that could really make the video. Experiment with actual dialogue and then modifying it to fit the characters. But overall, nice job.

TheRealNat23 responds:

I did use a voice simulation program.

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